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Dude, this is freakin' sweet!
I love this concept and the humor here, and the animation style suits it well.
This would make for a great series if you have anymore ideas for it.

Keep up the good work!

SkeletonCrewCartoon responds:

i have 2 seasons planned out.first season he wakens the other ancient ones season two he has to kill them.

Dude, I like this!
It's got kind of a Kablam feel to it, but more twisted and creepy. The visuals are real interesting too, like the finger contorting itself through the maze of nostril.

A few more sound effects would've been nice though, specifically the shot of the pig dude biting off his hand, a heavy CRUNCH sound would've been perfect.

Also, Frank Zappa and Postal 2. You have fantastic taste.

Kutaykomiks responds:

Kablam but more twisted is an amazing compliment. I was hesitant on adding more sound effects but a crunch would make it better. I really enjoy your work, thanks for your review!

Good idea and decent execution, but it kind of dies on the main character's design, unique as it may be (I can honestly say I've never seen a character design that was just a line with eyes), it kind of blends in a little too well with any background that's not a perfectly solid color.

The animation was kind of choppy too and the abrupt cuts are pretty disorienting, specifically when he fell down the stairs or when he was hit with the fire extinguisher, this has away of taking away the impact and killing the gag.

Overall, I'm happy with the fact that you said you're going to remake it because I see potential for a good short here, and I will be following you for when that remake is complete.

NotaBeethescribbler responds:

I can say that these issues will definitely be fixed in the new version I'm making. I'm sure you can also point out that I made this before I even knew that Adobe Animate had a way to control the camera. That "zoom in" was done automatically and boy, does it show.

Anyway, Thank you for the feedback. Always appreciated.

To quote the movie submission guidlines:
"Do not submit something that is merely a sound visualizer set to music, or a recording of your music project timeline. If you want to promote your song in the movie portal, it should be set to original animation like a proper music video; otherwise stick to the Audio Portal."

The song sounds pretty good though, this just isn't the right portal for it.

KONjure responds:

So I can exactly find where i would change it to "Original Animation" yet. The closes think i could find that would relate to my video was the "Music Video" option. If we're talking about the genre of the video.

But also thanks for the advice, and I'm stoked that you like it thus far lol

I kind of suck at promoting to im trying to figure it all out for myself

Such a simple joke, yet so funny.
Good one, 8/10!

Really good work on this, it's been a while since I've seen some good claymation.
You've earned yourself a follower, can't wait to see what you come out with in the future.

Soodumoodu responds:

Thank you. I'm working on something right now. It's not claymation but I'll make some more of that in the future too.

Eh, he's still got two lives left. He'll respawn eventually.
Funny stuff though, everything I could've wanted from a title like Mario Freakin' Dies.
Good work!

These are some very interesting and well made visuals. I love the mix of 2D and 3D animation.
This is some real front page material, I've gotta say! I think I'll go recommend it right now.

This feels like a good alegory for life.
Just keep going, because if you stop for even a second then you'll be run over by a truck.

10/10, would go fast again.

Aside from the sound quality, this was a pretty solid animation.
Good stuff man!

Life is full of regrets, Garfield.

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